See my first post under my pseudonym multifoliaterose, on zero-sum bias.
Not sure if this is relevant, but since you asked for “any suggestings”...
When I read your linked post, somehow it didn’t work for me in a similar way that e.g. Eliezer’s “Tsuyoku Naritai” did. The motivation part was missing, or rather I would have to derive it logically from the text. It felt almost as if you told the first half of sentence, then stopped, leaving the other half as my homework to discover.
I have no idea whether my reaction is typical or unique.
Terse writing is a status move “you should pay more attention to my text”, but more importantly an inconvenience in debate. If I am not 100% sure what you wanted to say, I am less likely to write a reply, because it’s possibly irrelevant. I am more likely to close the browser page, and read another article.
First step is to catch attention and motivate. In a perfectly fair universe, people would automatically pay more attention to the articles that deserve it, but in our universe, we need some kind of marketing.
Not sure if this is relevant, but since you asked for “any suggestings”...
When I read your linked post, somehow it didn’t work for me in a similar way that e.g. Eliezer’s “Tsuyoku Naritai” did. The motivation part was missing, or rather I would have to derive it logically from the text. It felt almost as if you told the first half of sentence, then stopped, leaving the other half as my homework to discover.
I have no idea whether my reaction is typical or unique.
Terse writing is a status move “you should pay more attention to my text”, but more importantly an inconvenience in debate. If I am not 100% sure what you wanted to say, I am less likely to write a reply, because it’s possibly irrelevant. I am more likely to close the browser page, and read another article.
First step is to catch attention and motivate. In a perfectly fair universe, people would automatically pay more attention to the articles that deserve it, but in our universe, we need some kind of marketing.