Yep. I agree with this. As I wrote, I think it’s a key skill to manage to hold the heart of the issue in a way that is clear and raw, while also not going overboard. There’s a milquetoast failure mode and an exaggeration failure mode and it’s important to dodge both. I think the quoted text fails to thread the needle, and was agreeing with Ryan (and you) on that.
Yep. I agree with this. As I wrote, I think it’s a key skill to manage to hold the heart of the issue in a way that is clear and raw, while also not going overboard. There’s a milquetoast failure mode and an exaggeration failure mode and it’s important to dodge both. I think the quoted text fails to thread the needle, and was agreeing with Ryan (and you) on that.