They took it halfway up the building transferred to a second elevator and took the second elevator the rest of the way to the top. → [missing commas:] building, transferred to a second elevator, and
until Alia put the glasses. → put on
“The actress’s name. Whose body are you wearing?” said Dominic.”Alia,” said Alia, “is the actor whose body I am wearing.” → is the actress whose body
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More typos:
They took it halfway up the building transferred to a second elevator and took the second elevator the rest of the way to the top. → [missing commas:] building, transferred to a second elevator, and
until Alia put the glasses. → put on
“The actress’s name. Whose body are you wearing?” said Dominic.”Alia,” said Alia, “is the actor whose body I am wearing.” → is the actress whose body
right now?” Dominic. → said Dominic.
Fixed the errors. Thanks. I also added an emphasis to indicate that the actor/actress inconsistency is not an error.
Fixed. Thanks.
Probably should be “brought”.
Fixed. Thanks.