I’m a little torn—it still seems too long, and the line “all they do is steal” guarantees that our theists (all eight of them) will take it the wrong way, but parts seem quite good.
Eh, upvoted to −1.
Length is indeed another possible problem, thank you.
I’m a little torn—it still seems too long, and the line “all they do is steal” guarantees that our theists (all eight of them) will take it the wrong way, but parts seem quite good.
Eh, upvoted to −1.
Length is indeed another possible problem, thank you.