I want to like this, your “imagine eating stopped overnight” was a nice framing device. I think you would capture more people with it being a fifth of its current length, and perhaps trimming some of the LLMisms: “the tether snaps”, “still capable of producing misery, but no longer subsidized by biology”, etc.
I want to like this, your “imagine eating stopped overnight” was a nice framing device. I think you would capture more people with it being a fifth of its current length, and perhaps trimming some of the LLMisms: “the tether snaps”, “still capable of producing misery, but no longer subsidized by biology”, etc.