The second person pronoun grates throughout this post; it’s a “chalk hitting the chalkboard at the wrong angle and making your hair stand on end” kind of feeling, and the snippet quoted is where it’s at its most pronounced. (I downvoted it earlier, but it’s taken me a while to put words to my feelings.)
So your encounter with Emma led you to discover one of your “unknown knowns”, or basic assumptions. But your writing comes across as making a much greater number of unwarranted assumptions about your reader. One of these you have the grace to make explicit: “romantic jealousy is your deciding factor in favor of monogamy”. Your Emma-epiphany might possibly grant you some kind of right to lecture a reader who is much like you with the exception of still holding that belief.
But what about your other unknown knowns? Just how many of the features of your own situation are you tacitly assuming also apply to your reader? What compelling arguments in favor of monogamy might you bring up if you put yourself for a moment in the shoes of a 40- or a 60-year old reader of LW? One who lives in a rural area and plans to run a farm for a living? One whose goal is to raise children? And so on. Despite giving lip service to the idea that one’s preferred relationship style is a matter of choice, you’re giving little value to someone who is facing that choice from a position other than yours, where “romantic jealousy” looms large as a consideration.
The final paragraph more or less gives the game away: this post isn’t really a curious and honest inquiry, it’s advertisement for a conclusion you have already reached and are planning to expand on. For all I know your conclusion is correct, but your methods to establish it strike me as suspect.
The final paragraph more or less gives the game away: this post isn’t really a curious and honest inquiry, it’s advertisement for a conclusion you have already reached and are planning to expand on. For all I know your conclusion is correct, but your methods to establish it strike me as suspect.
Me:
I suspect that monogamy is genuinely the best option for many people, perhaps even most.
The only conclusion I’ve reached is that polyamory is a good choice for some people, and that it might be a good choice for more people if they had some way of dealing with (irrational, unpleasant) feelings of romantic jealousy. Ignoring jealousy entirely, there are still good reasons to be monogamous; a number of them have been pointed out elsewhere in the comments.
My point here is only that you have a choice, and you are better off knowing that you do. Part of knowing about that choice is understanding what the other options are; I’m only proselytizing for polyamory in the sense that I think people are better off when they can make informed choices.
The second person pronoun grates throughout this post; it’s a “chalk hitting the chalkboard at the wrong angle and making your hair stand on end” kind of feeling, and the snippet quoted is where it’s at its most pronounced. (I downvoted it earlier, but it’s taken me a while to put words to my feelings.)
So your encounter with Emma led you to discover one of your “unknown knowns”, or basic assumptions. But your writing comes across as making a much greater number of unwarranted assumptions about your reader. One of these you have the grace to make explicit: “romantic jealousy is your deciding factor in favor of monogamy”. Your Emma-epiphany might possibly grant you some kind of right to lecture a reader who is much like you with the exception of still holding that belief.
But what about your other unknown knowns? Just how many of the features of your own situation are you tacitly assuming also apply to your reader? What compelling arguments in favor of monogamy might you bring up if you put yourself for a moment in the shoes of a 40- or a 60-year old reader of LW? One who lives in a rural area and plans to run a farm for a living? One whose goal is to raise children? And so on. Despite giving lip service to the idea that one’s preferred relationship style is a matter of choice, you’re giving little value to someone who is facing that choice from a position other than yours, where “romantic jealousy” looms large as a consideration.
The final paragraph more or less gives the game away: this post isn’t really a curious and honest inquiry, it’s advertisement for a conclusion you have already reached and are planning to expand on. For all I know your conclusion is correct, but your methods to establish it strike me as suspect.
You:
Me:
The only conclusion I’ve reached is that polyamory is a good choice for some people, and that it might be a good choice for more people if they had some way of dealing with (irrational, unpleasant) feelings of romantic jealousy. Ignoring jealousy entirely, there are still good reasons to be monogamous; a number of them have been pointed out elsewhere in the comments.
My point here is only that you have a choice, and you are better off knowing that you do. Part of knowing about that choice is understanding what the other options are; I’m only proselytizing for polyamory in the sense that I think people are better off when they can make informed choices.