Doing a bunch of line editing on the post is very nice of you, but also comes off as possibly passive-agressive in the context of you not having said anything nice about the post… most of the edit suggestions just seem helpful, but I’m left feeling like your goal is to prove that the post is bad rather than improve it (especially since you say “If those were all solved, more might be visible” rather than something encouraging).
All I’m saying is I’m a bit weirded out. Maybe I’m mis-reading bluntness as hostility.
Anyway, I’ll probably try and incorporate some of the suggested edits soon.
Doing a bunch of line editing on the post is very nice of you, but also comes off as possibly passive-agressive in the context of you not having said anything nice about the post… most of the edit suggestions just seem helpful, but I’m left feeling like your goal is to prove that the post is bad rather than improve it (especially since you say “If those were all solved, more might be visible” rather than something encouraging).
All I’m saying is I’m a bit weirded out. Maybe I’m mis-reading bluntness as hostility.
Anyway, I’ll probably try and incorporate some of the suggested edits soon.