I voted this down. While I think the question is somewhat interesting, I don’t think it’s germane to LessWrong’s discourse.
I also dislike the writing’s form. Too many questions at the beginning, too many parentheses, very unequal paragraph sizes, etc. It’s uncomfortable to read. If you can clean some of that up, then I think it might be suitable for an open thread.
Although I’m genuinely asking for help to develop this hypothetical fictional setting, and my main reason for doing this here is because I think LW attracts the kind of mind that would have the most ease in attacking such a question.
I voted this down. While I think the question is somewhat interesting, I don’t think it’s germane to LessWrong’s discourse.
I also dislike the writing’s form. Too many questions at the beginning, too many parentheses, very unequal paragraph sizes, etc. It’s uncomfortable to read. If you can clean some of that up, then I think it might be suitable for an open thread.
You English-speakers and your rigid style guidelines… thanks for the advice, though.
Actually… Also this
Although I’m genuinely asking for help to develop this hypothetical fictional setting, and my main reason for doing this here is because I think LW attracts the kind of mind that would have the most ease in attacking such a question.
You’re welcome! Thanks for making the suggested changes.
Upon a read of your stylistically improved post, I think I better understand what you’re aiming for. I withdraw my objection and my downvote.