That applause-light speech at the end just needs some variation, and I’m pretty sure it would fly. I’d replace about half of the “we should” with something else, like “it is important that we”, and “it would be dangerous to neglect” and so on, because right now it’s so repetitive that surely a lot of people would notice and realize what’s being done.
Or maybe i’m yet again overestimating my fellow human beings, as past experience says I am prone to do...
That applause-light speech at the end just needs some variation, and I’m pretty sure it would fly. I’d replace about half of the “we should” with something else, like “it is important that we”, and “it would be dangerous to neglect” and so on, because right now it’s so repetitive that surely a lot of people would notice and realize what’s being done.
Or maybe i’m yet again overestimating my fellow human beings, as past experience says I am prone to do...