I’d like to get right whatever it is I’m doing wrong here, so if anyone would like to comment on any problems they see with this or the parent comment (which are both scored 0) I’d be grateful for your input.
EDIT: since this was voted down, but I didn’t receive an explanation, I’m assuming it’s just an attack, and so I don’t need to modify what I do—thanks!
I’d like to get right whatever it is I’m doing wrong here, so if anyone would like to comment on any problems they see with this or the parent comment (which are both scored 0) I’d be grateful for your input.
EDIT: since this was voted down, but I didn’t receive an explanation, I’m assuming it’s just an attack, and so I don’t need to modify what I do—thanks!