… But there’s no sense crying over every mistake, you just keep on trying till you run out of negentropy.
May I suggest ‘But there’s no sense crying over every inaccuracy / you just keep on trying till you use up your negentropy’? Rhymes and balances the syllable count.
Brb, writing rationalist hymn.
:P
… But there’s no sense crying over every mistake, you just keep on trying till you run out of negentropy.
May I suggest ‘But there’s no sense crying over every inaccuracy / you just keep on trying till you use up your negentropy’? Rhymes and balances the syllable count.
Brb, writing rationalist hymn.
:P