This is a good and important article, but it would be improved by having a point. Examples of points are “Behold this compactly stated surprising truth I have now demonstrated” or “And that’s why you should do X” or “Thus the common belief Y is dumber than a sack of bricks.”
This is a good and important article, but it would be improved by having a point. Examples of points are “Behold this compactly stated surprising truth I have now demonstrated” or “And that’s why you should do X” or “Thus the common belief Y is dumber than a sack of bricks.”
This is a good and important quote, but it would be improved by citing the source.