I agree with the core thesis that we (rationalists) fucked up by abandoning politics… but this post is so badly written. It’s painful to read, especially when the core ideas are actually pretty original and insightful. Like a beautiful new laptop being casually tossed in the mud.
I’m worried about discouraging you too much from writing, but… maybe learn to prompt a little better next time? You have good ideas; they just need better presentation.
Well I can understand that but I said it earlier which is if you don’t have a very specific critique to help me out for the future I would prefer to spend most of our time discussing the actual content of my idea and not moving it into a meta discussion about my writing style. If you have specific suggestions I’ll be happy to take them in the future to improve my writing
I weak down voted.
I agree with the core thesis that we (rationalists) fucked up by abandoning politics… but this post is so badly written. It’s painful to read, especially when the core ideas are actually pretty original and insightful. Like a beautiful new laptop being casually tossed in the mud.
I’m worried about discouraging you too much from writing, but… maybe learn to prompt a little better next time? You have good ideas; they just need better presentation.
Well I can understand that but I said it earlier which is if you don’t have a very specific critique to help me out for the future I would prefer to spend most of our time discussing the actual content of my idea and not moving it into a meta discussion about my writing style. If you have specific suggestions I’ll be happy to take them in the future to improve my writing