If you are sincere that you really did just want to help me then ask yourself what are the implications of the way you are communicating yourself. Cuz from where I’m standing all it does is distract from the point I’m actually trying to have whereas you could have private message to me about it and then offered some real critiques and then I could have edited it. From where I’m standing it feels like you’re just trying to create a red herring and distract from the subject that I’m actually thinking is important. If you think the style of my writing is the most important thing then that should be a separate discussion we have entirely in a separate location
If you are sincere that you really did just want to help me then ask yourself what are the implications of the way you are communicating yourself. Cuz from where I’m standing all it does is distract from the point I’m actually trying to have whereas you could have private message to me about it and then offered some real critiques and then I could have edited it. From where I’m standing it feels like you’re just trying to create a red herring and distract from the subject that I’m actually thinking is important. If you think the style of my writing is the most important thing then that should be a separate discussion we have entirely in a separate location