I think this is a decently engaging story, but it sounds like a Claude story, not a Tomás B story. Ending is too happy, technology is allowed to be good, and there are no themes of the protagonist being complicit in a system they find abhorrent. Also “the protagonist of these stories in my context window goes to therapy and resolves their internal tensions” is the most Claude it is possible for a story to be.
I would be sad if you stopped writing stories because other humans could write stories that are of similar quality by some metrics, and I will also be sad if you stop writing because AI can write fiction which is good in different ways to the ways your fiction is good.
I think this is a decently engaging story, but it sounds like a Claude story, not a Tomás B story. Ending is too happy, technology is allowed to be good, and there are no themes of the protagonist being complicit in a system they find abhorrent. Also “the protagonist of these stories in my context window goes to therapy and resolves their internal tensions” is the most Claude it is possible for a story to be.
I would be sad if you stopped writing stories because other humans could write stories that are of similar quality by some metrics, and I will also be sad if you stop writing because AI can write fiction which is good in different ways to the ways your fiction is good.