Can’t speak with authority as a composer here, but I found your piece harmonically okay and spoiled only by lack of logic and form, not lack of melody.
Yeah, composing one chord at a time without writing it down wasn’t good for structure, either.
I think your idea is interesting, and I’ll listen to your piece when I’m not at work.
Yeah, composing one chord at a time without writing it down wasn’t good for structure, either.
I think your idea is interesting, and I’ll listen to your piece when I’m not at work.