I will agree that, in book form, this section will need more signposts and structure. Otherwise, readers will skim past things you want them to read.
Also, resist RPG references unless you explain them in the main text. Here, online, you will have many audience members who own that Spelljammer book and need no explanation for GURPS Friendly AI rules and where the jokes are. Most audiences will not get the significance of having a minor helm in a gnomish helm. They don’t even know what tinker gnomes are.
I will agree that, in book form, this section will need more signposts and structure. Otherwise, readers will skim past things you want them to read.
Also, resist RPG references unless you explain them in the main text. Here, online, you will have many audience members who own that Spelljammer book and need no explanation for GURPS Friendly AI rules and where the jokes are. Most audiences will not get the significance of having a minor helm in a gnomish helm. They don’t even know what tinker gnomes are.