Yes, the article is about intentional goal change, not accidental goal change. Section 3 of the article addresses objections to the main argument. If you don’t want to read the whole article, you could skip to that section. If you don’t want to read all of section 3, I would suggest reading section 3.1 for the summary of the main argument, then skip to section 3.4 for the “delay objection” and 3.5 for the “goal-first objection.” Those are probably the most relevant subsections for you.
I hadn’t seen this comment when I wrote the above response. But it still stands.
If you want people to read your article on a counterintuitive result, it seems like you really need to put the central argument in the abstract. Otherwise it’s pretty reasonable to assume that the central argument is fatally flawed.
The fact that your response doesn’t answer the obvious question either makes me even less optimistic about finding that answer if I take the time to read the whole paper.
If there’s just a miscommunication issue, in which there is a good answer but it’s just not in the abstract or that response, or it is but I’m missing it, I’d like to help you improve the communication of your argument.
As you said in the other comment, reading 3.4 and 3.5 were necessary. That’s because the actual argument you’re making is quite complex and describing it as a timing issue seems quite wrong.
I think you’re envisioning a goal that is not a goal. Your imagining a goal that is not a desire. That removes the functional property we are usually thinking of a goal having. If you don’t care whether your goal is accomplished, it’s not a goal in common parlance.
That is the meat of the argument. It’s about the nature of goals when separated from desires. That is relevant to the question of alignment and goals. I suspect you’ve created a contradictory assumption by thinking of a goal that doesn’t have the properties of a desire, but I’m not certain.
If we have called something a goal but also defined it as not having the functional properties of a desire that cause a system to pursue something, how is that remainder still what we’d call a goal? If I tell my boss I have a goal of finishing that report but have no desire to finish it, I’d say it wasn’t really much of a goal and more of a lie. Maybe I meant I’d finish it if nothing I actually desire comes up in the meantime; then I’d say it had a little bit of desire attached to it and just not much.
That’s not a full analysis and I don’t intend to do one right now. I need to get back to my work which very much assumes that it’s irrational to knowingly allow one’s goal to change. That’s assuming that the goal also has the properties of a desire; that there are functional mechanisms that will cause the system to make decisions that are estimated to cause that goal to be accomplished in the future. A decision to abandon that goal would cause it to not be accomplished, so those functional mechanisms would prevent that decision from being made.
There is some interesting stuff there, but the abstract does not point to it accurately, so I maintain that just not reading the article is the sensible response to that abstract. I strongly suggest you change it.
I’m glad you got more out of the argument after reading those sections. I agree that “timing problem” is not the best description for the argument. Calling it “the timing problem” was a relic of an earlier version of the argument that was more about timing. After submitting the paper and getting a revise and resubmit from the journal, I got some feedback from my supervisor that made me realize timing wasn’t the real issue. So, I changed the argument to make it less timing-based. However, I worried that changing the title of the argument and of the paper for a resubmission might disqualify the paper for further consideration (because it might count as a different paper at that point). Maybe that was overly conservative. I might have risked coming up with a new name for the argument and paper if I thought the name of the argument would deter people from reading the paper.
As for your critique after reading the sections, you’ve picked up on the issue I know I need to elaborate on! I’m working on a paper that is precisely about this, and have been since late last year. If you don’t mind, I might reach out to you for feedback once I have a finished draft.
I appreciate the feedback about the abstract, but the abstract is set in stone at this point.
Ah yes, I suspected that the incentive structure of academic philosophy and publishing in a philosophy journal was a big part of the issue here.
I’d be happy to help with your next paper if you want to talk through the ideas. I’d be less excited to contribute if you’ve already finished a draft. I feel that collaboration is more useful in the idea development stage than the polishing stage. At that point, there’s a lot of real sunk cost so outside contributions on the important parts of the argument become much less useful. Actually, I think that’s exactly what you described in being unable to really take your advisor’s good advice into account in framing this paper because it came too late in the process.
Just to clarify, I did change the argument after meeting with my supervisor, which is reflected in the final published draft. He said he didn’t think timing was the issue, so I figured out a better way to word the argument. The things I didn’t change were the argument title and paper title. I left “the timing problem” as the name for those, even though the argument wasn’t as obviously about timing anymore, because I thought changing the names might be a problem (and it’s entirely possible I was wrong about that). I thought that’s what you had noticed: that the name of the argument didn’t fully suit the argument itself. That’s because I changed the argument but not the name of it.
Yes, I understood all of that and that’s what I was referring to.
That change of argument but not title or abstract were exactly why I found the post so frustrating. The abstract didn’t actually give a good argument, because you’d changed the central argument but couldn’t change the title and didn’t change the abstract that much. I suspected that the practices and incentives of academic philosophy were somehow at fault. They were.
Yes, the article is about intentional goal change, not accidental goal change. Section 3 of the article addresses objections to the main argument. If you don’t want to read the whole article, you could skip to that section. If you don’t want to read all of section 3, I would suggest reading section 3.1 for the summary of the main argument, then skip to section 3.4 for the “delay objection” and 3.5 for the “goal-first objection.” Those are probably the most relevant subsections for you.
I hadn’t seen this comment when I wrote the above response. But it still stands.
If you want people to read your article on a counterintuitive result, it seems like you really need to put the central argument in the abstract. Otherwise it’s pretty reasonable to assume that the central argument is fatally flawed.
The fact that your response doesn’t answer the obvious question either makes me even less optimistic about finding that answer if I take the time to read the whole paper.
If there’s just a miscommunication issue, in which there is a good answer but it’s just not in the abstract or that response, or it is but I’m missing it, I’d like to help you improve the communication of your argument.
No need to read the whole paper. Section 3.4 is meant to respond to this sort of objection. You could skip to that.
As you said in the other comment, reading 3.4 and 3.5 were necessary. That’s because the actual argument you’re making is quite complex and describing it as a timing issue seems quite wrong.
I think you’re envisioning a goal that is not a goal. Your imagining a goal that is not a desire. That removes the functional property we are usually thinking of a goal having. If you don’t care whether your goal is accomplished, it’s not a goal in common parlance.
That is the meat of the argument. It’s about the nature of goals when separated from desires. That is relevant to the question of alignment and goals. I suspect you’ve created a contradictory assumption by thinking of a goal that doesn’t have the properties of a desire, but I’m not certain.
If we have called something a goal but also defined it as not having the functional properties of a desire that cause a system to pursue something, how is that remainder still what we’d call a goal? If I tell my boss I have a goal of finishing that report but have no desire to finish it, I’d say it wasn’t really much of a goal and more of a lie. Maybe I meant I’d finish it if nothing I actually desire comes up in the meantime; then I’d say it had a little bit of desire attached to it and just not much.
That’s not a full analysis and I don’t intend to do one right now. I need to get back to my work which very much assumes that it’s irrational to knowingly allow one’s goal to change. That’s assuming that the goal also has the properties of a desire; that there are functional mechanisms that will cause the system to make decisions that are estimated to cause that goal to be accomplished in the future. A decision to abandon that goal would cause it to not be accomplished, so those functional mechanisms would prevent that decision from being made.
There is some interesting stuff there, but the abstract does not point to it accurately, so I maintain that just not reading the article is the sensible response to that abstract. I strongly suggest you change it.
I’m glad you got more out of the argument after reading those sections. I agree that “timing problem” is not the best description for the argument. Calling it “the timing problem” was a relic of an earlier version of the argument that was more about timing. After submitting the paper and getting a revise and resubmit from the journal, I got some feedback from my supervisor that made me realize timing wasn’t the real issue. So, I changed the argument to make it less timing-based. However, I worried that changing the title of the argument and of the paper for a resubmission might disqualify the paper for further consideration (because it might count as a different paper at that point). Maybe that was overly conservative. I might have risked coming up with a new name for the argument and paper if I thought the name of the argument would deter people from reading the paper.
As for your critique after reading the sections, you’ve picked up on the issue I know I need to elaborate on! I’m working on a paper that is precisely about this, and have been since late last year. If you don’t mind, I might reach out to you for feedback once I have a finished draft.
I appreciate the feedback about the abstract, but the abstract is set in stone at this point.
Ah yes, I suspected that the incentive structure of academic philosophy and publishing in a philosophy journal was a big part of the issue here.
I’d be happy to help with your next paper if you want to talk through the ideas. I’d be less excited to contribute if you’ve already finished a draft. I feel that collaboration is more useful in the idea development stage than the polishing stage. At that point, there’s a lot of real sunk cost so outside contributions on the important parts of the argument become much less useful. Actually, I think that’s exactly what you described in being unable to really take your advisor’s good advice into account in framing this paper because it came too late in the process.
Just to clarify, I did change the argument after meeting with my supervisor, which is reflected in the final published draft. He said he didn’t think timing was the issue, so I figured out a better way to word the argument. The things I didn’t change were the argument title and paper title. I left “the timing problem” as the name for those, even though the argument wasn’t as obviously about timing anymore, because I thought changing the names might be a problem (and it’s entirely possible I was wrong about that). I thought that’s what you had noticed: that the name of the argument didn’t fully suit the argument itself. That’s because I changed the argument but not the name of it.
Yes, I understood all of that and that’s what I was referring to.
That change of argument but not title or abstract were exactly why I found the post so frustrating. The abstract didn’t actually give a good argument, because you’d changed the central argument but couldn’t change the title and didn’t change the abstract that much. I suspected that the practices and incentives of academic philosophy were somehow at fault. They were.