Sure “healthy” and “unhealthy” as a demarcation gives the reader no info, but I already felt like I was delving into details a bit too much. I didn’t want to turn it into a paper on the wonderful world of blood lipids.
Yes, I wasn’t criticizing your essay so much as making a general observation.
Sure “healthy” and “unhealthy” as a demarcation gives the reader no info, but I already felt like I was delving into details a bit too much. I didn’t want to turn it into a paper on the wonderful world of blood lipids.
Yes, I wasn’t criticizing your essay so much as making a general observation.