I hope I will return to this when I have time to read it properly and think about it properly, but for now I’ll just drop in two things at the meta-level: (1) I don’t know how comprehensible I’d have found something more in your usual concise style, but the above certainly seems nice and clear so it seems like you probably made a good choice. (2) I’m glad to hear that I’m perfectly tactful but now I’m worried about a different issue, namely that maybe I never say anything unless I have something mean^H^H^H^Hcritical to say, which I’m aware is the exact opposite of what generations of parents have been teaching their children to do :-). (I definitely do lean in that direction, and I’m somewhat prepared to defend it in that offering hopefully-informative criticism is arguably more useful than offering compliments, but it’s still probably suboptimal.)
I hope I will return to this when I have time to read it properly and think about it properly, but for now I’ll just drop in two things at the meta-level: (1) I don’t know how comprehensible I’d have found something more in your usual concise style, but the above certainly seems nice and clear so it seems like you probably made a good choice. (2) I’m glad to hear that I’m perfectly tactful but now I’m worried about a different issue, namely that maybe I never say anything unless I have something mean^H^H^H^Hcritical to say, which I’m aware is the exact opposite of what generations of parents have been teaching their children to do :-). (I definitely do lean in that direction, and I’m somewhat prepared to defend it in that offering hopefully-informative criticism is arguably more useful than offering compliments, but it’s still probably suboptimal.)