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Normal_Anomaly comments on
SotW: Be Specific
Normal_Anomaly
11 Apr 2012 0:56 UTC
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Good point. Replace “It was entertaining” with “It had flashy action scenes”.
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Good point. Replace “It was entertaining” with “It had flashy action scenes”.