Update Scanner reports: Chapter 1 has been edited so that Petunia recounts that she was ugly and Lily’s potion improved her skin and curves, but no longer mentions having been fat nor losing weight thanks to the potion. As a secondary change, possibly unrelated, Prof. Verres is also more tender towards his wife, an improvement on his characterisation.
My working hypothesis is that Eliezer is going to set up some rules about what potions can do (possibly just Polyjuice and variants), which could not be reconciled with sudden weight loss.
Another one now, chapter 3, when Harry sees Quirrell for the first time:
“I had the strangest feeling that I knew him...” Harry rubbed his forehead. “And that I shouldn’t ought to shake his hand.” Like meeting someone who had been a friend, once, before something went drastically wrong… that wasn’t really it at all, but Harry couldn’t find words.
My working hypothesis would be a slight political correctness adjustment as to the perceived importance of being physically fit, even if improved self-esteem resulting from the physical changes would be sufficient for her to aim just a tad higher in her mates.
Also, the potion would need not just temporarily alter the mass (as would Polyjuice), but rather shed it extra-quick, so any such limit on Polyjuice wouldn’t need to apply here.
Update Scanner reports: Chapter 1 has been edited so that Petunia recounts that she was ugly and Lily’s potion improved her skin and curves, but no longer mentions having been fat nor losing weight thanks to the potion. As a secondary change, possibly unrelated, Prof. Verres is also more tender towards his wife, an improvement on his characterisation.
My working hypothesis is that Eliezer is going to set up some rules about what potions can do (possibly just Polyjuice and variants), which could not be reconciled with sudden weight loss.
Another one now, chapter 3, when Harry sees Quirrell for the first time:
My working hypothesis would be a slight political correctness adjustment as to the perceived importance of being physically fit, even if improved self-esteem resulting from the physical changes would be sufficient for her to aim just a tad higher in her mates.
Also, the potion would need not just temporarily alter the mass (as would Polyjuice), but rather shed it extra-quick, so any such limit on Polyjuice wouldn’t need to apply here.
I considered that hypothesis, but the current text still mentions her having a “slim form”.
EDIT: Fresh new change, “slim form, smooth skin, slight curves” has been replaced by just “lithe form”.
EDIT2: I’m an idiot. I checked the wiki and the reason was much simpler: Petunia was actually supposed to have been thin in canon.
Actually, he just corrected it to be closer to the cannon.