Yes, the tone of my comment could be improved. I appreciate him for publishing his lessons to the community and wanted to give some suggestions to improve (eventual) future ones, if he feels like the higher quality is worth the higher effort, and with no obligation. “Al caval donato non si guarda in bocca” (You should not look at the teeth of a gift horse (to learn about its age))
Yes, the tone of my comment could be improved. I appreciate him for publishing his lessons to the community and wanted to give some suggestions to improve (eventual) future ones, if he feels like the higher quality is worth the higher effort, and with no obligation. “Al caval donato non si guarda in bocca” (You should not look at the teeth of a gift horse (to learn about its age))