The definition that I used isn’t that important to the piece to be honest. It was a segue into my other points. I would appreciate your thoughts on the insights I presented over the semantics.
I’ll read it (& comment if I have anything to say). But man the definition for the concept your post is about is pretty important, even if it’s “semantics”. Specifically, if this post were actually just about self-awareness (which does not seem to be the case, from a first skim), then I wouldn’t even be interested in reading it because I don’t think self-awareness is particularly related to consciousness, and it’s not a topic I’m separately interested in. Maybe edit it? If you’re not just talking about X, then no reason to open the post by saying that you are.
Edit: actually I gave up reading it (but this has nothing to do with the opening paragraph), I find it very difficult to follow/understand where you’re trying to go with it. I think you have to motivate this better to keep people interested. (Why is the time gap important? Why is the pathway important? What exactly is this post even about?) I didn’t downvote though.
The definition that I used isn’t that important to the piece to be honest. It was a segue into my other points. I would appreciate your thoughts on the insights I presented over the semantics.
I’ll read it (& comment if I have anything to say). But man the definition for the concept your post is about is pretty important, even if it’s “semantics”. Specifically, if this post were actually just about self-awareness (which does not seem to be the case, from a first skim), then I wouldn’t even be interested in reading it because I don’t think self-awareness is particularly related to consciousness, and it’s not a topic I’m separately interested in. Maybe edit it? If you’re not just talking about X, then no reason to open the post by saying that you are.
Edit: actually I gave up reading it (but this has nothing to do with the opening paragraph), I find it very difficult to follow/understand where you’re trying to go with it. I think you have to motivate this better to keep people interested. (Why is the time gap important? Why is the pathway important? What exactly is this post even about?) I didn’t downvote though.
Thats a fair point, I probably should!