Here’s an issue of style and presentation: Would you mind editing your text (or your future texts), striving to remove self-reference and cheerleading (“fluff”)?
A small number of uses of “I/my” and colorful language (“amazing, terrifying, bright, beautiful, silent, immense, multifaceted”) is reasonable, but the discipline of focusing almost entirely on the ideas being discussed helps both you and your readers understand what the ideas actually are.
As far as I can tell, the content of your post is “I will be posting over the next couple of weeks.”, and the rest is fluff. Since you did invest some time in writing this post, you must have believed there was more to it. The fluff has either confused you (into believing this post was substantial) or confused me (preventing me from seeing the substantial arguments).
Here’s an issue of style and presentation: Would you mind editing your text (or your future texts), striving to remove self-reference and cheerleading (“fluff”)?
A small number of uses of “I/my” and colorful language (“amazing, terrifying, bright, beautiful, silent, immense, multifaceted”) is reasonable, but the discipline of focusing almost entirely on the ideas being discussed helps both you and your readers understand what the ideas actually are.
As far as I can tell, the content of your post is “I will be posting over the next couple of weeks.”, and the rest is fluff. Since you did invest some time in writing this post, you must have believed there was more to it. The fluff has either confused you (into believing this post was substantial) or confused me (preventing me from seeing the substantial arguments).