Yes, this is an improvement. Now I just think that you’re going about things in suboptimal fashion, rather than also attempting to justify it with appeals to an article that goes against what you’re doing. As I doubt recommending an alternative plan would increase your chance of success, I will simply wish you good luck. It would be awesome to see something good come of this!
(FWIW, I don’t think you picked a good example for “even Eliezer can be wrong”. It seems too much like you made a very short search for an instance of Eliezer being wrong and stopped at the first plausible option, which wasn’t a very good one.)
Yes, this is an improvement. Now I just think that you’re going about things in suboptimal fashion, rather than also attempting to justify it with appeals to an article that goes against what you’re doing. As I doubt recommending an alternative plan would increase your chance of success, I will simply wish you good luck. It would be awesome to see something good come of this!
(FWIW, I don’t think you picked a good example for “even Eliezer can be wrong”. It seems too much like you made a very short search for an instance of Eliezer being wrong and stopped at the first plausible option, which wasn’t a very good one.)