There are plenty of very valid criticisms of my horribly writing here that have been repeated a few times each, but the one about my ‘conclusion’ adding too much new content is spot-on and original.
Does the added notes at the beginning as a replacement for the whole long thing help? Like with the shorter more immediate list of references (and the clarification of why I wanted to put that information about Michel Thomas in there, despite having to shoehorn it in)?
There are plenty of very valid criticisms of my horribly writing here that have been repeated a few times each, but the one about my ‘conclusion’ adding too much new content is spot-on and original.
Does the added notes at the beginning as a replacement for the whole long thing help? Like with the shorter more immediate list of references (and the clarification of why I wanted to put that information about Michel Thomas in there, despite having to shoehorn it in)?