Two nitpicks: The rabbi should say ‘AWESOME!’, not ‘NEAT!’. (It has appropriate religous tones, while the modern connotations fit the spirt of your text.) Also, Betty should be Mary’s cousin, not just her friend. (That’s the traditional Catholic position, although Luke 1:36 is not clear.)
An excellent little story!
Two nitpicks: The rabbi should say ‘AWESOME!’, not ‘NEAT!’. (It has appropriate religous tones, while the modern connotations fit the spirt of your text.) Also, Betty should be Mary’s cousin, not just her friend. (That’s the traditional Catholic position, although Luke 1:36 is not clear.)