Lord Voldemort’s legillimancy tore through Luna’s mind. → Legilimency (at least it’s always capitalized in the official wiki)
“Uh-huh,” said Hadmistress McGonagall. → Headmistress
There had never been third cauldron. → a third cauldron
Also:
“The Forgotten Library was a regular hexagon centered around a giant Pensieve. Seven giant shelves radiated toward the corners. [...] Six desks were interlaced between the seven shelves.” → I don’t understand. Where in this symmetrical library with six sides and six corners do you fit seven shelves in a regular pattern?
Typos:
Lord Voldemort’s legillimancy tore through Luna’s mind. → Legilimency (at least it’s always capitalized in the official wiki)
“Uh-huh,” said Hadmistress McGonagall. → Headmistress
There had never been third cauldron. → a third cauldron
Also:
“The Forgotten Library was a regular hexagon centered around a giant Pensieve. Seven giant shelves radiated toward the corners. [...] Six desks were interlaced between the seven shelves.” → I don’t understand. Where in this symmetrical library with six sides and six corners do you fit seven shelves in a regular pattern?
Fixed the typos. Thanks.
The thing about six desks was bad writing. I have clarified the geometry.
Also, “Quirrell” is globally missing its second l.
Fixed. Thanks.
This is not fixed.
It isn’t?
At least the final chapter has the name wrong.
Ah, I see. Fixed. Thanks.