I like the direction of the text, but you lose me with your motivation section.
Losing weight as an easy task? Motivationally or otherwise? What?
Creative work as a motivationally hard task? So that one could get more motivation from other people’s motivational videos, rather than from one’s own creative impulses? (Yes, writer’s block is a thing, but that’s a more involved topic. Like what happens to the creative aspect if one forces oneself to do creative work, and so on. That’s for a longer text, not for a short one.)
I like the direction of the text, but you lose me with your motivation section.
Losing weight as an easy task? Motivationally or otherwise? What?
Creative work as a motivationally hard task? So that one could get more motivation from other people’s motivational videos, rather than from one’s own creative impulses? (Yes, writer’s block is a thing, but that’s a more involved topic. Like what happens to the creative aspect if one forces oneself to do creative work, and so on. That’s for a longer text, not for a short one.)