Though the English grammar is kind of second-rate, the anthem Reluctant Heroes from Attack on Titan is great for this theme of “We fight wars and our friends die” thing that’s been going on in this fic
EDIT: Corrected typo oh lordy this is so embarassing...
You may want to correct the typo on “though”—on a first reading it seems like you’re criticising Eliezer’s grammar and then going on to make a separate comment.
Though the English grammar is kind of second-rate, the anthem Reluctant Heroes from Attack on Titan is great for this theme of “We fight wars and our friends die” thing that’s been going on in this fic
EDIT: Corrected typo oh lordy this is so embarassing...
You may want to correct the typo on “though”—on a first reading it seems like you’re criticising Eliezer’s grammar and then going on to make a separate comment.