I have stuff to do right now, but I’m hoping to come back soon and post my thoughts so far. The blurb and the first few paragraphs make me cringe at the thought of this being posted more widely in its present state.
...Okay, I was wrong about coming back soon. I’m way behind on some work, and by letting myself feel obligated to give good critique I’ve turned reading the fic into work. Sorry.
I have stuff to do right now, but I’m hoping to come back soon and post my thoughts so far. The blurb and the first few paragraphs make me cringe at the thought of this being posted more widely in its present state.
...Okay, I was wrong about coming back soon. I’m way behind on some work, and by letting myself feel obligated to give good critique I’ve turned reading the fic into work. Sorry.