The first two sentences are pretty good, but last one is long and clunky. Can I suggest as a second draft, “If you love truth, learn to love correction. If you hate illusion, learn to love disillusionment. If you want to improve, do not run from change.”
The first two sentences are pretty good, but last one is long and clunky. Can I suggest as a second draft, “If you love truth, learn to love correction. If you hate illusion, learn to love disillusionment. If you want to improve, do not run from change.”