While I agree with most of the criticisms already expressed, I just wanted to give some words of support, you’ve clearly put a lot of work into this and we do need more introductory material like this. It reminds me of Scott McCloud’s work.
I think that another version of this comic that has a non-furry “protagonist”, and with other tweaks suggested here, would go a long way. I honestly think it would be a shame if this didn’t happen, because you definitely have the skill, and the will, which is pretty rare around here.
While I agree with most of the criticisms already expressed, I just wanted to give some words of support, you’ve clearly put a lot of work into this and we do need more introductory material like this. It reminds me of Scott McCloud’s work.
I think that another version of this comic that has a non-furry “protagonist”, and with other tweaks suggested here, would go a long way. I honestly think it would be a shame if this didn’t happen, because you definitely have the skill, and the will, which is pretty rare around here.