In the first section, yes. In the later sections, no.
Preferring minimal changes, I’ve altered the sentence you had a problem with—but not in the way you suggested. Your way is fine, too. I just like mine better.
In the first section, yes. In the later sections, no.
Preferring minimal changes, I’ve altered the sentence you had a problem with—but not in the way you suggested. Your way is fine, too. I just like mine better.