I can’t critique your plan, because I can’t parse your writing. My suggestion would be to put some effort into improving the clarity of your writing. [1]
Even basic things, such as the avoidance of long sentences, sometimes with side notes included and separated from the main sentence by commas, rather than e.g. em dashes, and making the scopes of various syntactic structures unambiguous, could go a long way towards making your text more legible.
I can’t critique your plan, because I can’t parse your writing. My suggestion would be to put some effort into improving the clarity of your writing. [1]
Even basic things, such as the avoidance of long sentences, sometimes with side notes included and separated from the main sentence by commas, rather than e.g. em dashes, and making the scopes of various syntactic structures unambiguous, could go a long way towards making your text more legible.