“Favor surprise, as long as it doesn’t engender too much disbelief. Avoid anything that lets the reader think, “I could have written that sentence.”
That’ll depend on your audience, there are people who enjoy having their own thoughts affirmed.
Sometimes its a surprise that someone else thinks like we do.
“Favor surprise, as long as it doesn’t engender too much disbelief. Avoid anything that lets the reader think, “I could have written that sentence.” That’ll depend on your audience, there are people who enjoy having their own thoughts affirmed. Sometimes its a surprise that someone else thinks like we do.