This is good detail. Thank you for it. I have made adjustments. Most importantly, to the first paragraph, and a transition before the YouTube paragraph.
I’m not reading what you said as a promise to help me iterate, and don’t want you to think you’re obligated. I have already gotten value as-is. But if you want to compare with the original, it’s still unmodified in the copy on my blog for now.
This is good detail. Thank you for it. I have made adjustments. Most importantly, to the first paragraph, and a transition before the YouTube paragraph.
I’m not reading what you said as a promise to help me iterate, and don’t want you to think you’re obligated. I have already gotten value as-is. But if you want to compare with the original, it’s still unmodified in the copy on my blog for now.