It seems to me like you’re asking the wrong questions instead of asking them.
(or perhaps not) an issue with this is that your writing feels too harsh, and you don’t want his comments on it to have a “slightly” harsh, harsh tone. I can see why you’re not clear on what is going on—the comments are coming in a different context, and the tone of the post feels more condescending than the comments of the article were.
I like the tone of the post. I generally thought the tone of the post was good.
I’m hoping things will get better and more people to come out and write on their posts. I think that’s what it’s like to have a bad experience with commentary.
It seems to me like you’re asking the wrong questions instead of asking them.
(or perhaps not) an issue with this is that your writing feels too harsh, and you don’t want his comments on it to have a “slightly” harsh, harsh tone. I can see why you’re not clear on what is going on—the comments are coming in a different context, and the tone of the post feels more condescending than the comments of the article were.
I like the tone of the post. I generally thought the tone of the post was good.
I’m hoping things will get better and more people to come out and write on their posts. I think that’s what it’s like to have a bad experience with commentary.