Welcome!
Also...I think it still may need a fix: paragraph 11 now reads
normative way; that you should wire it the way I say just because,
but I think you want to swap the comma with the semi-colon:
normative way, that you should wire it the way I say just because;
Welcome!
Also...I think it still may need a fix: paragraph 11 now reads
but I think you want to swap the comma with the semi-colon: