Well, OK. I hope you can see how this might not come across to the reader—and how it looks more as though you are trying to talk your lady friend around with some rather dubious facts.
You’re right. I’ve added a parenthetical. Hopefully that will help.
Well, OK. I hope you can see how this might not come across to the reader—and how it looks more as though you are trying to talk your lady friend around with some rather dubious facts.
You’re right. I’ve added a parenthetical. Hopefully that will help.