It looks like I have to read the whole post to see whether it is of interest to me, because there is no summary. Instead you seem to just wade in to the detail.
I tried reading the first sentences of each paragraph but that was useless because they are almost all opaque references to the previous material.
I suggest you add a summary and start paragraphs with a sentence encapsulating the key idea of the paragraph.
It looks like I have to read the whole post to see whether it is of interest to me, because there is no summary. Instead you seem to just wade in to the detail.
I tried reading the first sentences of each paragraph but that was useless because they are almost all opaque references to the previous material.
I suggest you add a summary and start paragraphs with a sentence encapsulating the key idea of the paragraph.
Thanks, I had considered adding something at the top but didn’t actually do that. Will add it now.