I’ve written some posts.
I’d like to get better at writing posts.
I still have some more material for posts.
I’d like to write it well.
So, would people be willing to critique my work so far?
Particularly helpful-awesome would be pointing out things I did well somewhere that I didn’t do well somewhere else. Also nice would be pointing out what I did badly and well.
Crocker’s Rules apply.
Miscellaneous:
http://lesswrong.com/lw/7ix/story_rejection/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/80t/thinking_in_bayes_light/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/64t/foma_beliefs_that_cause_themselves_to_be_true/
Consciousness:
http://lesswrong.com/lw/7pm/blindsight_and_consciousness/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/7yr/neural_correlates_of_conscious_access/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/81w/the_protagonist_problem/
Just do it:
http://lesswrong.com/lw/53e/just_try_it_quantity_trumps_quality/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/4up/dont_fear_failure/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/4ln/go_try_things/
[Request] Feedback on my Writing
I’ve written some posts.
I’d like to get better at writing posts.
I still have some more material for posts.
I’d like to write it well.
So, would people be willing to critique my work so far?
Particularly helpful-awesome would be pointing out things I did well somewhere that I didn’t do well somewhere else. Also nice would be pointing out what I did badly and well.
Crocker’s Rules apply.
Miscellaneous:
http://lesswrong.com/lw/7ix/story_rejection/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/80t/thinking_in_bayes_light/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/64t/foma_beliefs_that_cause_themselves_to_be_true/
Consciousness:
http://lesswrong.com/lw/7pm/blindsight_and_consciousness/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/7yr/neural_correlates_of_conscious_access/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/81w/the_protagonist_problem/
Just do it:
http://lesswrong.com/lw/53e/just_try_it_quantity_trumps_quality/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/4up/dont_fear_failure/
http://lesswrong.com/lw/4ln/go_try_things/