Parts like
“Dumbledore gave you this?” Hermione gasped. “Yes… he didn’t really explain why. But then he couldn’t explain the rock either.”
and
But the warm glow of academic pride washed over her face all the same.
are really well-done. It feels as if your writing could have been part of HPMOR.Thank you!
Thanks for the encouragement. Appreciate it :)
Parts like
and
are really well-done. It feels as if your writing could have been part of HPMOR.
Thank you!
Thanks for the encouragement. Appreciate it :)