liked the video, i think you improved from the first :)
Specifically -
I think the thumbnail is better, more eye-catchy and likely to get clicked.
the title is better, i think many people would wonder “huh, why do smart people become stupid?”.
A few points for improvement -
the intro was nice, but not really attention grabbing.
You used a lot of clips of people talking, which was good, i think you could mix it up a bit with some audio from them here and there, can make the video a bit more fun (and even give examples).
The subscribe thing at the end was a jump scare, not so nice.
You should engage with commenters, Either liking their comments or replying.
all in all—I think you’re doing a good job, and i subscribed, keep going :)
liked the video, i think you improved from the first :)
Specifically -
I think the thumbnail is better, more eye-catchy and likely to get clicked.
the title is better, i think many people would wonder “huh, why do smart people become stupid?”.
A few points for improvement -
the intro was nice, but not really attention grabbing.
You used a lot of clips of people talking, which was good, i think you could mix it up a bit with some audio from them here and there, can make the video a bit more fun (and even give examples).
The subscribe thing at the end was a jump scare, not so nice.
You should engage with commenters, Either liking their comments or replying.
all in all—I think you’re doing a good job, and i subscribed, keep going :)